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Destroying the world,
One breath at a time.
Untraceable fractures,
The perfect crime.

Riddled with holes,
You're dead but you're breathing.
I can see into your heart,
Who are you decieving?

And no words are spoken,
As I swallow the blame.
Force-fed suggestions,
Vague in love's name.

Forgive me my darling,
For calling so late.
I just need to stop drowning,
In this sick loving hate,

And as I reach out,
You hold out your hands.
And I need you to fight this,
To challenge my demands.

Still with your eyes averted,
You allow me a second's grace.
But perhaps your just trying,
To block out my face?
©2007-2009 ~Blessed-Silence
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:iconpure-expectations:
OOoh how I love your writing! I know the poem should have made me feel bad, or have those emotional strings in my stomache be plucked one by one like a harp, however just seeing your writing made me feel that energy-racing glee through out my whole body. I love your writing, and this one feels so good to me.

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You'll understand when your time comes, love.
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I'm glad it brings you so much happiness =] I dont want other people to feel bad over my writing. I love you and I love you even more for loving my writing =]

I miss you love.
:iconlaurenjerry:
pretttttttttty...i really love this. its very strong. it does remind me of me and you...you're so clever ^^

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Funny thing about black and white. You mix it together and you get grey. And it doesn't matter how much white you try and put back in, you're never gonna get anything but grey.
-Lilah Morgan "Angel"
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it says... face.
YOUR FACE.
I like this one; pretty deep...
Would it have to do with *cunt*?
:iconblessed-silence:
Kinda like your dad's FACE!

I think you should say "YOUR FACE" to him abouts now. And Mashiara...touche. =]

And it always have to do with *cunt*...hehehe we is silleh...

And thankyou for the likingness.
:iconnon-refundable:
We needa talk.
message me or prank me when you can, so i can call you or something.
ASAP.
:iconpure-expectations:
My God it's been over a month since I've been on this account. I feel so bad about that!!

And it's been forever since I've been on to comment people, or return comments so now nothing really makes any sense anymore.

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You'll understand when your time comes, love.

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